Turnaround time: More than a month
Description of story
Deana Martinez may have lived with AIDS for more than 15 years before doctors diagnosed the disease. As she struggles to manage the disease, she has found marijuana to relieve her constant bouts with pain and nausea. Deana is a medical marijuana patient in Colorado, using the drug supplied from local dispensaries as a lifeline to help make it through the day.
I'm looking for feedback on the storyline/narrative, pacing, editing. I feel like it ends too abruptly, but there was no ending to the story, she is still struggling everyday to survive. I'm interested in any and all advice that will help me improve
Gear used in production
Zoom H4n with lav mic: used to capture the audio during interviews
Sennheiser MKE 400: used to capture nat. sound, mounted on the D3s