Turnaround time: More than a day but less than a week
Description of story
Story about a woman and her mother in San Marcos, Texas who because of a set of misfortunes, are forced to beg for money. This was shot and edited in a day as part of a week long storytelling workshop a year ago.
Does the story hold the viewer's attention? How's the pacing? It feels sluggish because of challenges I wasn't sure solve. I won't say what they were just yet; want to see if anybody can guess from what they see ;-) How could I have improved this
Gear used in production
Canon XH A1
Audio Technica and Sennheiser wireless and shotgun mics.