Life Stories: Serving The Spirits (view this story)

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Michael Fagans Nov. 29, 2010, 9:40 p.m. permalink

Phil:

There is some nice work here and kudos on getting the access.

The first minute felt unfocused for me, and while the older sister sound caught my attention, it was not in a good way. I was not sure who the piece was about until the 1:10 mark. Once you settled on the youngest priestess, things started to roll along well.

As someone who doesn't know enough about voodoo, the information at the 3 min mark was very helpful.

Definitely see growth in your work, keep it up.

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