Operation Restoration (view this story)

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Michael Lloyd Sept. 4, 2010, 11:08 a.m. permalink

Overall, I think this piece is pretty well done. I agree with your regret for not using a tripod (or monopod or some camera support on site) to steady your shots. The opening two shots are pretty shaky at the very time you are hoping to bring viewers into the story with your most powerful footage. These weren't the most powerful shots to open with. The lighting bothers me less. The prostitutes on the street might want to have remained more anonymous (or so I guessed). Artificial light would have seemed more sensational to me. Subtle use of music worked well.


What were they inhaling? Could someone have explained that in narration? You didn't really hit the drug use as well as the physical abuse of the kids.

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