Details
Category: Feature
Media: Video
Turnaround time: Less than a day
Description of story
Lisa Medrano was diagnosed and treated for breast cancer in the past year. She takes on a "new look," which she will sport in the Susan G. Komen Race for the Cure.
Feedback requested
Flow, transitions; narrative.
Gear used in production
Sony V1U
Sennheisser wireless
It has a nice pace to it. The opening clip was great audio, grabbed us right away and showed you how spunky this lady is. I really liked your voiceover "survived twice" line. It raised a question in my mind and then she answered it..."survived the 80s"..and that was funny.
Loved the shots of her daughter watching, the tight shot of her with pink hair and her daughter's face to right, the daughter's tears, the close up of her pink hair getting rinsed (I would have liked to see that second or two longer).
I wanted to see more details and maybe some super-details. The medium shots were great, but would have benefited with a greater mix.
At one point you have a lower-third that says "Toni & Guy April 20, 2010" that confused me. I'm still not sure what that was referring to.
Nice, lively story.