Winter swimming (view this story)

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Brandon Ross June 29, 2013, 5:16 p.m. permalink

Great images. I could feel the cold watching this video.

For editing, I thought the cuts between stills and video were disorienting at times. Some shots were held a while and some were cut really quickly. I would have liked to see a smoother pace and quick shots of some extreme close ups.
But the images were super strong. Really great images. Maybe just even out the editing pace a bit, if that makes sense.
Those are my thoughts, for the little that they're worth.

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Peter Lundberg Aug. 19, 2013, 4:52 a.m. permalink


Thanks for your opinions. I had the oportunity to cover the same event this year for another paper, Svenska Dagbladet, and I did a short multimedia story this time as well. However I took another route building my story around an intervju with one of the participants who also was a nurse. Feel free to have a look at that story:

You could probably leave any thought at their website.

Thanks again Brandon for you time and your feedback!

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